In retrospect, I pretty much hate what I wrote yesterday. It's all tell and no show. I wanted Valentine and Mirek to spend the scene displaying every stereotype I could think of while still remaining IC, but the exposition at the end is just clumsy and ridiculous. Sigh. I'll have to scrap it and retool it ( Read more... )

Jen, I am totally going to answer your question to Valentine soon (especially considering you are the only one who asked anything), I promise ( Read more... )